Ah, September.
I love this month...the clear, crisp skies make my heart sing. The school supplies are still fresh and new and learning is on the agenda. Like so many educators, this time of year is my true New Year celebration.
I love this quote attributed to Virginia Woolf.
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Patricia offered, Life at the speed of grace, as a Spiritual Journey Prompt last year. I'm sharing my response to Mary Lee's challenge to the Inklings which was to write to the poem, Next Time by Joyce Sulphen.
Sulphen's original poem has a positive tone. I struggled to write the phrase, next time, from being one of deeper personal regret. I wrote a poem...discarded it. Wrote a second poem...discarded that one too. This third poem is more wistful. Wistful is more positive and lovely to me than the angst of regret.
It wasn't until seeing (by looking at an old calendar and thinking it was from THIS year. OOOOPS!) Patricia's Prompt, though, that I had a title. I'm not sure the title makes sense if you are a grammarian. I am not. I'm taking meaning from the words in a looser way that fits this poem.
Grace, Past Perfect
Next time, I’ll be good at math.
I’ll remember the order of operations to add, subtract, multiply and divide
more time for us.
I won’t rush through homework
I’ll enjoy learning
without my intricate schemes
of getting out of it.
I’ll read aloud to you
–all the poetry that doesn’t rhyme
the gorgeous images
we’ll paint in our minds.
I’ll find ways to enjoy
weeding your giant garden
a farmer’s acreage, really
–remember the deer
meandering in to nibble green beans and lettuce?
But I’ll be decades away
poking fingers into dirt
under my suburban kitchen window
with your grandkids
chatting about how many days until
we can eat beans
from the seeds we're planting.
I will remember all the steps
of how to sew a hem, a button,
a zipper. I’ll still buy my clothes
but I won’t throw away
what I can mend.
I’ll be better tending relationships.
I now know can’t last forever–In fact,
I’m calling my sisters right now.
I won’t even have to say
I’ve been thinking of you.
Linda Mitchell --draft
If you happen to be reading this on Friday, make sure you hop over to Buffy Silverman's blog for the weekly Poetry Friday round-up. Buffy is one of my favorite nature writers. You won't want to miss her work!
I've got more shined up clunkers to share. These are from comments left at my annual Clunker Exchange Post. Anytime I could use my OLW '24, WORLD, in a poem, I posted to the padlet of WORLD poems I'm keeping for this year. Find refurbished clunkers from:
Laura Purdie Salas
Karen Eastlund
Marci Flinchum Atkins
Connect to more Inkling responses to Next Time:
Mary Lee Hahn @ A(nother) Year of Reading
Catherine Flynn @ Reading to the Core
Molly Hogan @ Nix the Comfort Zone
Margaret Simon @ Reflections on the Teche
Heidi Mordhorst @ my juicy little universe