Hello Poets,
Aren't you just loving Poetry Month? I'm enjoying everyone's poetry projects. Rose C. at Imagine the Possibilities inspired me with her call-and-response idea. My weekly WORLD poem plays along.
Today is my turn to share a couplet in our community's progressive poem. This poem started out with two lines by Patricia Franz at Reverie and continues each day of April with couplets from other poets until here.
I imagine this poem as a journey with visits to various blogs and websites. It's been a lovely journey so far. I'll try to make your visit pleasant before you continue on the interwebs to Denise at Dare to Care for day 13.
cradled in stars, our planet sleeps
clinging to tender dreams of peace
sister moon watches from afar
singing lunar lullabies of hope.
almost dawn, I walk with others,
keeping close, my little brother.
hand in hand, we carry courage
escaping closer to the border.
My feet are lightning;
My heart is thunder.
Our pace draws us closer
to a new land of wonder.
I bristle against rough brush —
poppies ahead brighten the browns.
Morning light won’t stay away —
Hearts jump at every sound.
I hum my own little song
like ripples in a stream
Humming Mami’s lullaby
reminds me I have her letter
My fingers linger on well-worn creases,
shielding an address, a name, a promise–
Sister Moon will find always us
surrounding us with beams of kindness
Take it away, Denise!
Read the list below to learn where our poem has been and where it’s headed.
Thanks for sharing the progressive poem, Linda. I haven't been following it - April has had a busy start for me - so enjoyed reading it from beginning to now. So clever.
ReplyDeleteThe letter seems to help the positive feelings no matter the stress, Linda. I like the 'beams of kindness'. Every little bit helps, doesn't it?
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda! As my turn for the poem draws near, I'm reading extra carefully. I like how you have brought the moon back in as a comfort.
ReplyDeleteYes to bringing back Sister Moon!
ReplyDeleteWonderful, Linda - promises of kindness!
ReplyDeleteI'm on the 27th. This is a "before" list! Lol! I love where this is going and the rhymes and near rhymes. Great cohesiveness besides beauty!
ReplyDeleteI like the return to the beautiful image of Sister Moon, watching over.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Linda, for the beams of kindness.
ReplyDeleteOh, I love to watch a progressive poem develop and grow and become its own entity. I'll keep following! Thanks, Linda. ❤️
ReplyDeleteLinda, I started with your World Padlet and found so many interesting poems that I had not reas yet. I would love to showcase your 3/24 poem with the rabbit art at my Poetry Parade Padlet for a later entry in my new gallery. Are you interested? Your couplet for the PP is soothing, an important ingredient in this journey poem. I am trying hard to imagine what I will write after Denise.
ReplyDeleteLinda, thank you for this beauty. I love our poem. I am nervous to add to it.
ReplyDeleteOh, I love these progressive poems! it's so much fun to see where everyone takes it - I'm planning to try this with my writing students, too!
ReplyDeleteLoving the progressive poem so far and your sweet contribution Linda!
ReplyDeleteI hope kindness come from more sources than the Moon...<3
ReplyDeleteNice! Ruth, thereisnosuchthingasagodforsakentown.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteI love how this poem is evolving and especially how your line weaves back to an earlier stanza. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThe poem is taking shape, telling of something of which we are all aware and carefully watching. Thank you for sharing it in its entirety (so far). Lovely.
ReplyDeleteIt's neat how each year is different ... having couplets and an overarching theme is a new spin. Some things are always the same, though -- I'm nervous about my turn!
ReplyDeleteI'm loving seeing how this poem is progressing!
ReplyDeleteThank you for bringing Sister Moon back into the poem. I love that she is surrounding the poem with kindness.
ReplyDeleteAhh, Sister Moon with her light and kindness... I am glad our young speaker has had a moment to breathe.
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